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To Pax (Galaxy League entrance short story)

Discussion in 'Everything Else!' started by Jaxx, Jun 6, 2017.

  1. Jaxx

    Jaxx Insignificant Person

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    @PaxMilitae cleaned up his suit for the fifth time.

    Actually, it was the seventh time he cleaned up his suit, but in his nervousness, Pax failed to keep count, but who could blame him, really?

    He didn't want to set-up this party. He didn't ask for a celebration this big. He was drunk on happiness when he announced it, he didn't call for... This.

    But, well, here he was. In a fancy suit. In front of the largest building in the Forums.

    I mean, sure, the building hasn't been used in a looooooong time, but still... Did a party even need a door this big? Much less a whole building? Hell, there can't be more than fifty people to this party... can there?

    As Pax hesitated in front of the massive doors, a certain someone right next to him laughed.

    "Come on, Pax, no need to be so scared." said Raklet.

    "I don't know... I mean, I expected celebrations, but a party? Here? In a place THIS big?" said Pax as he pulled his gloves for the umpteenth time.

    "Hey, big event, big party. They want to throw us one this large? Well let them! We deserve this one cap. You deserve it."

    "Sheesh Raklet, you're making me blush with those cheesy lines."

    Sighing, Raklet lightly slammed one of her giant hands into Pax's back.

    "Just go in and join the party already!"

    Pax turned to his robomaid, and couldn't help but smile.

    "Well then... We might as well make a grand entrance."

    "That's more like it!"

    A huge grin emerged on Raklet's face. Pax turned to the doors once more, finally placing his hands on them.

    A slight pause.

    "Don't worry cap, I got your back."

    Reassured by his friend's sentiment, Pax pushed the doors wide open and took a large, loud step forward.

    He paused at the sight in front of him.

    The room was large and lively, just as he expected, full of light, a giant table of food in the middle, a grand staircase... Man, was the Lobby ever this big before? Taking in the guest count, Pax found that there were way, waaaaaaayyy more than the less than fifty he expected.

    He saw @Nawzu chatting up with @Ozuros and... was that @Paradox ? Man, it's been a while. @Akeryu and @Kyoko Hitaka eating on the table, with Kyoko being strangely hungrier than usual. Next to @Xetael , however, Kyoko looked rather tame - at least she kept her mouth closed.

    He saw Iados and @JLawliet with @Unknowned, probably arguing about Beatrice and Uriel. He saw @DeltaRubee and @Tsun-Nya and @Renrashin all drunk, having a dance-off, @Rynaki with his friend Snow, was that @Clockwyrk and @VentusXP ?

    Hell, he saw forumers he'd never even met before, and forumers that haven't been heard from in months. @Xuda and @Uranursm and @Dark Demon Crimson and @Cpokemon12 and @AstroCat from the Nekofleetz, @Akilos and @tsukiko and @TsukiS and @Yuu and @BakaMeowEcchi , of whom no one's heard from in a while.

    The currently active people of course, were the majority... But he still knew little to none of them, @Duckiee , @Vendanna , @Titoviana , someone who may or may not have been @EA01 Luka ... so many people Pax didn't know or even met before.

    Holy heavens, did they have to invite everyone they knew?

    The group that had most of attention though, were the players. His team.

    They were around a table, lively as ever. Shu was in heated debate with Lucian, (maybe Ia's?), Serestia found herself resisting the urge to stand and enter fisticuffs with someone's Duran, A calm Freyja aided Nerua, who was panicking over the drunk Bell flirting with an equally drunk angry Shura, Altair was surrounded by look-a-likes, discussing something about their managers while Askeladd quietly sat with Vann, glaring at Marilyn on his other arm. Possibly most hilarious of this group were Metatron, who was having an awkward staring contest with Uriel, while Ravian sat in the background, smirking next to a silent Leventor.

    And of course, there was Raklet, who stood by him, reliable as ever.

    As Pax entered the room however, one-by-one, each of these activities came to a halt, until all that were left were Xetael's loud chewing and Bell's drunken flirting... And even those came to a stop. Silence filled the hall.

    And then came the applause.

    At first it was small, from his closest friends like Iados and Unknowned and Jasper, but it slowly spread and became louder and louder until it threatened to deafen Pax' ears. There were cheers and whoops and whistles, there were people chanting his name and there was laughter filling the air. He began to notice others who he didn't see when he entered, @Nyte and @Rizelea and Quackip and @Trinityz and many others...

    A small part of Pax wanted to hide in a hole, embarrassed.

    But a massive part of him had his arm raised with Raklet, chest out, pride clear on his face.

    The cheers grew louder, and more people whooped and whistled, everyone was standing now, applauding and chanting, congratulating Pax. Ravian raised a glass full of drink, a bright glint in her eye.

    "To entering the Galaxy League!"

    The drunk Bell shakily raised her own glass and followed.

    "To kicking ass and taking names!"

    With a giant grin on her face, Raklet raised Pax using her giant robotic hands, careful not to break him, and shouted over the roaring crowd.

    "To Pax! The madman who brought us to Galaxy League!"

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    Gratz man. You brought your team to Galaxy League. Hope you don't mind the tags.
     
    Last edited: Jun 6, 2017
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  2. Tsun-Nya

    Tsun-Nya Goddess of Dere

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    I totally won that dance-off
     
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  3. Unknowned

    Unknowned The Part-time UnWhaler

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    Jaxx beat me to it D:

    Well written Jaxx ma boi ;)
     
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  4. Jaxx

    Jaxx Insignificant Person

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    Thanks.
     
  5. Xuda

    Xuda Belly Warshipper

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  6. Jaxx

    Jaxx Insignificant Person

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    Even in a fanfic for mah bro Pax, I had to add in mah fellow nekofleeterz
     
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  7. Renrashin

    Renrashin Champion

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    Gz Pax
     
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  8. Ozuros

    Ozuros "All you need is Hime" -Ozu 2017

    Wonderful work :eek: Most definitely worthy of ushering in the new age that Pax has entered with his own grit and perseverance.
     
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  9. Kyoko Hitaka

    Kyoko Hitaka Why is my club a meme?

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    Hella cute.

    Congratz Pax.
    lnom
     
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  10. Razura

    Razura Overlord of my waifus Lilith, Armel and Asakura

    The hell are we even talking about? Gratz to Pax on what, exactly?

    AND WHEN WILL I HAVE MY OWN FANFIC, @Jaxx?
     
  11. Akeryu

    Akeryu Elaine waifu's waifu <3

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    Gratz for Pax to pass Galaxy league again with Raklet!!!

    @Jaxx I want my story too once I complete 50 CoT. lsoon
     
  12. PaxMilitae

    PaxMilitae This world needs more Noa

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    I got to Galaxy League for my first time :)
     
  13. Xetael

    Xetael The Oblivious

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    This was quite nice lol. It actually felt good and warm reading it. No over sexualisation of characters and quite basically a fun gathering that was quite a nice read. One of best forumer/fanfic I have seen. @Jaxx thank you for making my day with this :)
     
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  14. Razura

    Razura Overlord of my waifus Lilith, Armel and Asakura

    Oh wow, gratz on reaching GL!
     
  15. PaxMilitae

    PaxMilitae This world needs more Noa

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    My thoughts exactly, hehe. I wouldn't want anything different from it.
     
  16. Jaxx

    Jaxx Insignificant Person

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    It's been in production for a while now, I have scenes in mind, but can't collect them well enough to make a short story of it.

    When that happens, I probably won't make a party as big as the one Pax got, would be bad to do the same thing twice.

    X-x-xe? You... You okay man?

    You actually sounded like a serious, down-to-earth kind of dude for a moment there.

    ... Nah, I'm probably just being paranoid.

    *calls 911*
     
  17. PaxMilitae

    PaxMilitae This world needs more Noa

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    I can think of something, it's the least I can do. Just need one or two screenshots covering her most used players, especially the ones she used on CoT.
     
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  18. Xetael

    Xetael The Oblivious

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    *Coughs* *fixes his hair* I meant....wtf Jaxx!? Where's the girls in bikinis and huge Oppai!? You call this a fanfic!? I have seen better writing by cat!
     
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  19. Rynaki

    Rynaki The Nezzy Oracle

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    I am so triggered right now
     
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  20. Jaxx

    Jaxx Insignificant Person

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    That's more like the Xe I know and run from.

    Seriously though, thanks man. I did my best for mah boi Pax
    I ship it.
     
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